ECHOES STING

I dreamed, you dreamed, they dreamed.
I smiled, you smiled, and they smiled.
I cried, you cried, they cried.
Same pattern, same emotion, different direction.

Author's Note

Reviews

[gombeggar]

repetition...can sometimes amuse

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Gom :) Appreciate it much!

[Hester Vane]

You have managed to communicate quite deep thoughts with only few words. Great Job.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Hester, I appreciate your review :)

[Strawberry]

A nice shorty

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Straw :)

[Junert]

Nice poem.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks again Sister :)

[Junert]

Nice poem.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Sister Junert glad you drop by :) thanks.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Now this was interesting... Marc, simple but oh so meaningful... it made me thing, which direction... great little piece of emotions. Thank you.

- Elisa

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Elisa you are always an inspiration :)

So are you!!! :) very welcome!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:)

[Dakshta]

True that! :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thansk Dakshta it is short :) I am glad you like this piece.

[Pete Langley]

This is a cameo of emotion that covers a large canvas, Marc. Well done. P.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Mr. Pete you are always an inspiration :)

[Ency Bearis]

good thought with that brevity

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Ency B. glad you drop by :)

[PP]

Awesome message in just 4 lines!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks P.P :) I am glad you like the 4 lines. :)

[PP]

I have the attention span of a 2 year old, so four lines does it well for me:) You are welcome!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) great your are brilliant!

[PP]

:))