Spirit of Hanzo

Running in unfamiliar string

Blades slashed the stocky form

Blood bursting out from deep long wound.

Hammer smashing straight to the black villain

He blown away the castle creating a shady space

The shadow of the lone brave heart surpass

The domain was triggered by his existence

Daggers flying indiscriminately in dissimilar direction

The mighty warrior shun the danger like a smoke

His likeness fades in the dark realm

Floating mid air like a dragonfly

Drawn his swords in the sky

Strikes all villain in a vicious rays of light

All was vanquished turned into dust

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Guilt]

Shinobi. Gave an air of the song Battlecry by Nujabes. The most untouched subject I have come across here. Legends of asia.

- Guilt

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Bro. :) though I am not sure with this piece :)

[gabrielle]

i am not familiar who Hanzo is but the way you vividly painted his skill with sword and his determination to surpass life's battle reminds me so much of the greatest swordsman ever- my kenshin himura. lol.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Hi Gab thanks for reading Hanzo is in samurai showdown it is a game in arcade lol yes actually I dont know where I am going after this hehehe.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

besides being in a sonnet form, what are you going for?

it is interesting but for me, a bit hard to follow...but that could just be me.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) even me I am asking what next? thanks Mr. Jacob you are always inspirations I will update it later as soon as I figure it out :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

This is an experimental work :) still you can break or build me, I just need your honest review guys. Thanks a lot!