The Last Escape

 

 

 

His sinful soul drifts in the ocean of sinister

The mad dog strikes chaos

The callous legion spites nightmare.

He dedicated his life diminishing the feeble

His dark logic booms to his vicious goal

The unwanted walks into the abyss

Slowly vanquishing the entire race

The time has come his power began to end

The felonious slayer fled with his queen

He bolted out from the realm of his mystic cosmos

Hiding in the bunker of indefinite mode

She stood with his ethereal world

Blindly embracing the aberrant thought

She escaped the world with his love

Red army chasing the pair

The monster is hiding inside the bunker

Cyanide gives her the promise of love

Bullet embedded in his dome

In his last minute he crawled to death

In her last minute she cried

She ended with a real love

While he ended in hell

Author's Note

Reviews

[Pete Langley]

I understand the human need for a hell...... where we need to be satisfied that the wicked of this world will languish in an eternal torment of suffering commensurate with their earthly deeds, but I cannot subscribe to it. My personal take on this is that these individuals are the extreme manifestation of a trait in human character which is inherent. There is a paradox in humankind which has occupied anthropologists and philosophers since time immemorial . p.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I couldn't agree more, your review is excellent!

[Dr. Wood ?]

very good my friend....excellent write....Hitler was a mad man

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Dr. Woods? I appreciate your review :)

[Junert]

He deserve hell.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Sister :) thanks for your time reading my work.

[Junert]

And I like your picture.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

heheheh :) thanks

[Trigorin]

Not bad. I think you've handled the topic very well and while I do think you could have made it a bit less obvious as to who you were talking about, you do give a very distinct feel and tone with this piece. Well done.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Tri, I always treasure your review, hope you will still support me in my future works thanks a lot.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This sounds like the Eva Braun/ Adolf Hitler demise. Well written, poignant and emotive.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Mr. John yeah you are right :) Thanks for the review I value your words all the time.

[icelandicblue]

Well I can only think of Hitler and Eva Braun in this. The red army was a great historical reference. I like the grittiness of this poem. I loved these lines:

The monster is hiding inside the bunker
Cyanide gives her the promise of love

They got away too easily.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Ice, your review is always the best :) thanks a lot.

[Basu Gupta]

ohhh great work....loved the theme...nicely written..

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Bro. you can do it too, just trust yourself :) thanks a lot.

[Basu Gupta]

ur always welcome...

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Hi guys I need an honest review break me or build me I am open for critics.