ADONIS

The Unwanted Marriage

 

 

 

 

 

 

When I spit fire into the realm

The prom orb astounds with flame

Venus kissed  my passionate name

Playing with the fire is the name of the game

Lusting nymphs reached my solid strong swords

Princess imprisons me, as she spells the cursing words.

Now my world closed in complete darkness

The dungeons so deep, where my suffering is boundless

My swords no longer in fire

My armor soaked in the cold mire

As my hands had reached the stone wall

I shouted so loud, hoping somebody heard my call

 

 

Reviews

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Nice theme, good wordplay!!!

"Princess imprisons me, as she spells the cursing words."

Such a pleasure to read this. Thanks!

- Elisa

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Elisa glad you passed by and give a great review thanks a lot :)

I loved this, I have a weak for the Greek lol :) well done!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) Thanks again love you line " I have a weak for the Greek," lol it is epic.

;)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) Thanks Cheers!

[Jack...]

To break free, hoping someone will heed your pleas for help. Nicely done.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Jack I appreciate your review :)

[SimpleMind]

The very moment I read the title, I was like 'this'll gonna be another alpha-male poetry'. But you did a great job and proved me wrong in the end. It's a great write! I love the way Adonis sought for help in the end :) Great stuff you got here!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yeah thanks for the great review. Adonis was trapped in unexpected marriage lol :)

[SimpleMind]

Haha I was thinking the same thing. It's like most of the most filipino male youth who suddenly get trapped in an unexpected parenthood. It's the worst!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol yes :)