The saga of Roxanne

Sometimes an extra ordinary love can be found in unexpected place and time.

I walked into the path of uncertainty

My body struggled to contain the poison within

Each whisper of your voice in the air

My soul is dying to see you in the dark

My tears can’t stop every moment you are far from me

Now hear the beat of my heart

I will vanish tomorrow when the sun comes

But when the nights get nearer, I will rise again

Kiss my lips, conquer my fortress

Take me away I am ready for your love

 

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Take me away I'm ready for more of your poetry....!

'My body struggled to contain the poison within'

Wow, does that line encompass a whole slew of interrogative questions. Great one Marc...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A powerful write Marc with vampire flavours to it? Nicely balanced and flowing with lovely metaphor use.
How did you do the picture with your own writing on it?

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I am graphics designer I do editing the picture with the text in Photoshop :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks for the review Mr. John :) I appreciate it.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

It looked really good. What is your first language?

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I am from the Philippines, 1st language: filipino local languages.

[SM Davis]

Your English is flawless. Tagalog is sometimes a difficult tongue to translate. :) Nicely written.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks a lot

[Holly Mason]

very dream like setting well laid out in your words
You feel for the pain this kind of life brings but you also touch on the chance of love
the title drew me in but the content got my attention
thank you so for sharing

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Holly for the review I appreciate, thanks for your time reading my work.

[blueholmes]

cool!!! i love it! love everything about it. i don't know but the other side of me used to love this kind of poem :) classical and elegant :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Blue :) glad you like it :)

[khalid]

very nice mind provoking poem. it takes the mind to many areas trying to explore the beauty of the poem and who was meant by it. i loved how you have picked your words and how you have drawn the images.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Khalid :) love how you review the poem. :) thanks a lot.

[khalid]

my pleasure..i loved the poem..

[gabrielle]

The saga of roxanne seems like an agonizing wait for deliverance. Nicely penned!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Gab :) thanks for the review.

[SimpleMind]

I almost thought the poem was written for me XD (I was named Roxanne by my real mother)
It's so full of emotions. 'Tis a very good heart melting piece!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol Really? I really don't have an idea about your name heheh thanks glad you like it. :)

[SimpleMind]

Yes. But I never had the chance of using that name.
Anyway, my pleasure :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) Thanks

[Dakshta]

Really beautifuly written, I specialy liked the second paragraph.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks :) glad you like it :)

[Alina-Sofia]

I like the name I love the poem

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Alina, I appreciate your review :)

[Jack...]

Very cool, I like how this piece progressed.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Mr. Jack :)