Video Star

 

The mirror inside my room glisten

Whispering a pleasing voice within

Did you recognize me? A voice asking

While I am completely lost in everything

Startled and confuse, I said no

I am asking the voice who are you?

The voice answered, I am the watcher, from the beginning of time.

Your life, is a song that rhyme

I always watch you from the day you were born.

Don’t be afraid, you don’t need to hide.

I knew you are watching porn

I am stealthy scared with this watcher’s voice

I have to run out of my room, I have no choice.

Then I wake up it’s just a dream

Holding my pillow while my body is in flame

 

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Ha, sounds like the voice of your mother perhaps! Guilt about porn, I didn't think men cared....who knew?! Good read, love the format...'my body is in flame' another video you say... !

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) yeah it is a mind game when the boys age 11-15 I think heheh :)

[Frieda P]

11? I was still playing with my Barbies I think! lol ;-P

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

hahahah :)

[Frieda P]

xD

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Seems you are not sleeping Frie what time now in U.S?

[Frieda P]

What is this 'sleep' concept you speak of? ha...it's 9 AM I've given up on the idea fro today, at least....

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

heheh :) you have to drink more coffee.

[Frieda P]

I have to drink more something, I'm not sure it's coffee. ;-)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) Go my friend cocoa is better.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I mean go with cocoa hehehe

[AYVID N]

Whether we are asleep or awake, our conscience is always awake and subconsciously poking and prodding us. We live by its rules.

Very well said Marc!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Divya for passing by and for the review :)

[Eddie Phillips]

This was very creative. I liked the story and thought behind it. Who's watching the watcher? LOL Good write

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yeah thanks Bro. everyone of us have our fantansy :) thanks for the review :)

[Lucien Maier]

the formatting and the poem are a bit haphazard. at first I thought I would not complete the read. However it was able to hold me all the way through. That is a good talent to have!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Lucien glad you visit and review my work :)

[Dakshta]

Uh that was a scary nightmare...I mean just imagine, someone always watching what you are doing....that would be so not good...
But the poem is really nice, I really enjoyed reading it :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol Thanks my friend for the review :)

[Dakshta]

welcome :)

[Peter H]

wow good poem excellent use of words

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Peter for the review :)

[SimpleMind]

Hahaha!

We all do, right?
Well, if a thing like this will happen in real life, it'll be a nightmare for most.

Well done! 'Tis a really wonderful piece , speaks of forbidden truths...I love this much!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol Thanks Glad you like this piece :)

[SimpleMind]

I surely do.
Really, I had a big smile after reading. My friends should experience something like this, even just once.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :)