My body is your kingdom

Love can move mountain but this opposite, sometimes we have to set someone free, in the name of love.

Tomorrow before dawn, I have to say goodbye
Please be strong and don't cry

I know we don't have a choice
They never heard our voice

Now kiss me as there is no tomorrow
Now love me as nobody can take it from you

In every kiss of your lips, it gives promises
Promises of never ending love that we missed

My body is your kingdom, I will be your king.
You will be my queen, you are my everything.

My heart and soul only for you and our love is true
This night will fade away but I am happy, I spent it with you.

Now as the dawn comes, my teary eyes looking at your face
I wish I am the lucky one, kissing you today in the altar of grace

In a very solemn hall when you are walking down the aisle 
I will missed you, as I am traveling alone in the distant miles.

I wish I am the man holding you in this precious moment of  your life
I wish I am the lucky man, happy to call  you as my wife.

As priest says you may kissed the bride
My heart bleeds, my tears fall as it hurting me inside

In my mind you are the only one, sorry If I did not fight for our love
You are special to me, you are the best thing I ever have

Reviews

[khalid]

this really reminds me of a song which i love by Wael Jassar..oozorini youm zifafik maqdirtish afrah zaihom..meaning ( forgive me, at your wedding day, i couldnt be, as happy as they were because i have never expected myself to be..one of the audience)

i feel the pain in this poem. it is really hard to feel disability to protect the lady a man loves and letting her for another. if i were at your place(thank god i am not) i dont think i can kiss her if i feel that im losing her. but anyways, people are different..

i liked the shape and the structure but i really felt you have been writing about something at the beginning then you turned to something else..

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks a lot Khalid for the good review :) yea sometimes we can give our last kiss if we really love the person.

[khalid]

i said that i would never do, because the taste of this kiss will remain forever reminding the two of the pain hidden..i wouldnt kiss her if i love her..

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) Yea I could not agree more...but some doing it just to cherish the love.

[khalid]

cherishing dying love is suicide commetting..

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) Yeah I agree.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I am just writing for a month and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank you, I love you all.

[Nick.B]

A very tasty write indeed...great job

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Nick :)

[Angeldust-magic]

This seems rushed

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks for the review

[Frieda P]

Intensely beautiful read, such fervor and yet nothing will come of it...there are clearly traces of tears left on this page. Very lovely in it's sadness and warmth.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Frieda for the read. I really appreciate your time reading my work.

[Frieda P]

My pleasure.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Guys, thanks for the review, thanks for liking this poem. I just want to share this,
Simpleminded wrote another version of this poem "My body is your kingdom (Her Voice)."
the poem is dark, beautiful emotional piece, I love it! The write is genius. Thanks Simpleminded in writing another version of this poem.

[SimpleMind]

Wow~ thanks for plugging? XD


Haha really, I had great time writing the other side. Thanks :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Welcome Dear :)

[Pax]

it flow so well... the emotions is well rhyme that match the feelings intent...

"My body is your kingdom, I will be your king.
You will be my queen, you are my everything."
~ love this line, very real and true... in all levels of love...

the ending is quite sad.... but this piece is really beautifully written... as if dug deep from your heart then poured to your writes... Great!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Bro. :) I appreciate it big time.

[AYVID N]

Beautiful poem.
Gut wrenching heartbreak.
But why could they not elope?

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

They have a perfect love but the girl is rich and set to marry a rich bachelors, an arranged marriage her parents have done a long time ago. Another side of story” My body is your kingdom “ will be written by Simpleminded we will wait for that.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I am rewriting this piece into a short story, I will update it soon.

[AYVID N]

I await the next part!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks :)

[SimpleMind]

The love....why, i felt sad?..they didn't make it in the end,..

The love is so intense, yet cannot be...a very well done write!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks :) I really appreciate your review. Yes sometimes right love but it is in the wrong place...wrong time...but right person to be love.

[SimpleMind]

Well,..maybe it's not love in the first place. Maybe...just maybe, love only exists between God and his child, not with fellow human beings.

Hahaha but it's just a thought though :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) somehow you have a point.

[Jack...]

Very beautiful and pleasing to read.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Jack for your time reading my work, thanks for the review.