Questions

 

 

 

 

I wonder if you still love me,  if my hair turned into gray

I wonder if I had dried lips.  Would you still kiss me torridly?

 

Would you dance with me again?  Dancing our favorite song?

Would your feet move and willingly come along?

 

My question was naive, as it is not timely to ask anymore.

My feelings are unchanged, you are the only I adore

 

I wished you’re still here

I wished you are here to wipe my tears

 

I’ve wished I asked this question before you were gone

I’ve wished I knew…the answers before losing someone

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The questions of love are many. Would be nice to know the ending before the final moment. I like the questions and the thoughts in the poem. Love is hard to hold and very hard to understand. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Coyote for your time reading my works I appreciate it big time :)

[Junert]

Yeah I wish I'd use the right words then too. Lovely.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thank you Junert :)

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

This is one powerful message, I love it. Thanks for sharing Marc :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Welcome bro. :)

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

:)

[Pax]

I’ve wished I asked this question before you were gone
I’ve wished I knew…the answers before losing someone
~ oh how sad... broken heart ends up in regret... if only regrets comes first but it will never be... it will always be a reminder that we should have done better... but still looking at the brightside in your poem your hoping for a second chance...
wonderful work kabayan!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Kabayan, you are right, it's important how we treasure each moment of time. Showing them how we loved them and asking those questions is a must, before it's too late. Thanks for the review.

[vanila bean]

I LIKE THIS POEM A LOT IT SHOWS THE HEARTBREAKING OTHER SIDE OF LOVE EXCELLENT JOB!!!! :) VB,

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks for your time reading my work :)

[vanila bean]

Your welcome this poem i feel can really relate to me! Please read my poem Painted by the Wind it is kinda about being in love as well thx Vb, :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Ok I will check it, thanks again.

[Zap-the-awesome]

Hear, hear! But if we had all the answers what would be the point in life?
There were some grammatical errors, whether that matters to you or not, but otherwise excellent work!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Our point would be there is a closures in everything. Living in a life that full of questions is in vain. sometimes you will ask I wished I knew before... So showing, asking, sharing and enjoying things while we have a time is a priority things to do :)

[Zap-the-awesome]

Hm. Well I can't say I agree but you do make a point and everyone is entitled to their opinion. Personally, I think questions are what makes life interesting. There's always something worth finding out. A new dream to chase once the old one is done.

[Zap-the-awesome]

I didn't disagree with your last sentence just the part of knowing the answers

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Its alright :) love to hear more from you :) cheers bro.!

[AYVID N]

Sad but we always seem to realize too late...
This poem tells a lot and carries a powerful message. Say it while you can!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Divya, yes its really true we have to say it before its too late.

[AYVID N]

You are welcome. And sometimes it's not to late to realize and make amends! All the best! :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) Thanks again

[SimpleMind]

I take this more as a reminder that I should show to my loved ones how I love them rather than a sad piece of losing someone suddenly without telling them their worth. But since I don't have loved ones for now, I'm on exception..right? :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) you are right! thanks for your time ready my work.

[SimpleMind]

my pleasure :)

[Addi]

This is really beautiful. And sad. Nice work!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Bro. :)

[Addi]

Sure, any time :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is so sad...so sad...

we need to tell our loved ones how we feel --every day...so if they leave us too early,
they know...we have told them...

expression...

my poem More than a Flicker is about my best friend who died back 1984...

the last time i spoke to her was on the phone...last words said, "i love you, Paula"

i am so glad i had said them to her. one spot "my feelings are unchanged"

and yes, real love transcends this life.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Jacob its really true, we have to tell them while we can, how much we love them. thank your for your time reading my work.