Lost

Sometimes we fall in love and we give everything and we settled being lost in the end.

If I walk away, would you still remember me?
I've looked into your eyes I know it won't be easy

Broken pieces of promises we made
Remembering those sweet intimate words we said

Every kissed, every hugs, everything about you
I can't forget it, because my love for you is true

I gave my life to you, as I did not leave anything for myself
I was down and lost, I badly needed your help

But where are you? you left me behind
Those sweet memories would only be in my mind

I am wishing every seconds of my random thought
You will be my knight and together we fought

In my greatest desperation
In my dark retribution

I am completely lost.

Reviews

[Sheik]

Perfectly describes unrequited love. I remember this one wonderful day I spent with a guy, and how they'll never feel the same about me.

[Nightfall]

I' was lost in your poem...if i truly say...

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Dont worry I will find you hehehe :) thanks buddy for your time reading my work.

[AYVID N]

A great poem on loss. The sadness and despair of the subject is very well captured in these lines:

"In my greatest desperation
In my dark retribution

I am completely lost."

Sorrow very well narrated.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Divya, sometimes life not completely go on what we expect. That's why the other side of the coin there is always a broken dreams. Thanks for the good review :) Cheers!

[AYVID N]

Cheers back! :)

[gabrielle]

What a poignantly bittersweet right. nicely penned!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Gab

[Peter H]

its doesnt seek to hide anything here , i love it simply and captivating a beautiful piece many can relate to

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Dude :)