A CONSCIOUS REMORSE

A CONSCIOUS REMORSE

it was a heavy heart to carry

a waterfall of tears

a message swept away

in a trail of a killer at prowl

it's a heart of pain so weary

whispering in my ears

a prayer of the dying

my fingers drenched in blood

my blessed stolen thoughts

my exit to your wave of fear

my apple amongst the crowd

my helpless soul sorrounds

it was heaven in my scent

your angry twisted veins

sweetest song to hear

the drip of your blood to the ground

it's a cloud that covers 

  

the sanity in me

a knife to cut between

between my string of thoughts

my beloved sweet revenge

my screaming, crying end

my one escape to the truth

my helpless hand, my helpless heart

it was a heavy heart to carry....

Reviews

[Anna]

Dark is awesome well I mean that is what I write about...weird that I do not write about light things anyway great job loved this writing :)

[Jordan Deall]

This is very moving and wonderfully dark piece. Well done!

[An owl on the moon]

Profoundly dark and moving.. taking us into the psyche of life and death.. wondering and longing... the pain of the human condition in all its weakness.. Powerfully voiced in the deepest hues...

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. intensely vivid and poignant beyond measure ... it seems to me sometimes ... that sensitivity got devalued at some point ... but no one noticed ... and now ... the few sensitive ones that remain ... are over burdened ...