song of the second tide

Looking for familiar faces in place where i could not find strength and only confuses me 

until i let myself fall back down again in an utmost feeling it ain't right..

to me or to anyone that has felt the surge that i have never been to this before...

i talk of songs that hurt people...

i play games that make them bleed..

that i don't understand their hopes and fears...

i don't wanna see it happen...

but it never stops...

sometimes i feel like i am caved in with the weary thoughts...

it tires me...

Reviews

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. you couldn't be caving in ... though that expression is brilliantly deployed in this stunning piece of poetry ... maybe the people around you are looking through a microscope ... while you're taking an aerial view ... maybe ...

[Haeshin]

It sounds like this poem trails off before the ending, but at the same time it seems to fit the poem's nature.