Today... Tomorrow ... Forever

Today  i cried

But not for me

For wasted opportunities

That  will never be

 

Today i felt lonely

I dont know why

Surrounded by people

Who dont hear my sighs

 

Tomorrow may be different

But  now is too soon to tell

It may bring unfamiliar feelings

Or ones i know too well

 

Tomorrow is another day

To change  things for the best

Or to face another challenge

To put me to the test

 

But dont ask me for forever

That isnt mine to give

All i can offer is this second

For as long as i live

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ladysue]

A beautiful flowing piece...I loved your words...

[cartera]

Keep writing.
ATB
Alex.

[Taylor H.]

Loved this. I loved the theme (tomorrow is another day) this was greatly written as well.

[R. Nella]

Very nice rhyme, that almost anybody would be able to relate to. I like how you portray the uncertainty of one day to the next.

Exactly the sort of poetry I like to read.

[emmajoy]

What a lovely post .. it's you and your feelings expressed so subtly and gently .. it's strange how some day's we're not quite sure if people understand, then you shake yourself down (or up!) and know you have a special place in this world.

You've captured metre and the flow so well here: 'Tomorrow is another day
To change things for the best Or to face another challenge To put me to the test.'

Lovely, Marcie .. thank you so much for sharing.

[Art Sun]

nicely written poem...

[DarkLovingRaven]

I love this! It just flows with life! Keep on writing more, friend!

[Ellen Hammond]

Simply beautiful!!! I love the way you draw the reader into the moment of the here and now. Great rhythm and rhyme too! A delightful read with a good message too.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

You are amazing poet , the way you play with words in such a gentle lovely way , the flow always wonderful , the words touch so deep , so what can I add girl, you are just perfect did ! ....

you see , you made me write your style ,

XX Me