Hidden

Hidden

A Poem by M. Shepherd

Caught in your orbit
by the same source we are lit
Sometimes
I hide where your shadow falls
And together we are an eclipse

© 2015 M. Shepherd


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i love brevity, allows for those shadows to be interpreted and felt many ways...

i have been there and done this...there was love, yes...but together we were more a shadow than a sun or moon...

Posted 8 Years Ago


M. Shepherd

8 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob :)
Very mysterious and short, right to the point and emotional. Great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Only the shadow knows. Well done short verse.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M. Shepherd

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
-- sometimes, i wonder if being consumed so completely is what we really want... or not at all... and i can't quite make up my mind... -- exquisite poetry...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M. Shepherd

8 Years Ago

I feel as an apprentice here, it feels safe in that shadow. But someday..
. serah .

8 Years Ago

-- hmmm... i sense what you mean...

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M. Shepherd
M. Shepherd

Portland, OR



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