lust first lost

im sure almost everyone female may have epeinced this at some point,and anyone male may be this or know someone very much like this,the charmers!

i cant seem to let the memory fade..
you sit me down and ''baby iv got somthing to say
this isnt really working for me cos im the kind of guy who likes to play
god forbid i'd ever allow myself to stay
with a person who wants more than 'life is just a game,
and if you cheat yourself along the way then youl know you'l be ok'
happy flitty flirty you sitting in a chair
looking at the whole in your life,lokin a bit bare
no one you dare to love,nothing to lose
no extreme emotions,no way of getting bruised
end it all before your in too deep
let the true love inside of you forever be asleep
this way you can stomp you way through life
forver feeling free
but you dont realise that life IS to love somone
and thats ur freedom under lock and key
you excuse your mental prison cell with 'the right person hasnt come along for me'
well let me ask you this my sweet..how old do you have to be?
before you ever realise true love isnt a visual thing you see
its not a threat to your freedome because true love will set you free!

Author's Note

i think im scared because most of my writing is qyute dark,or 'depressing',wich makes me feel a little nervous to put it out there,what do you think,do you think i should be a little light hearted or write more positive poetry?

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

This was deeply moving and beautiful! I was depressed for years, so I still have a darkness to my writing. I think this was perfect!

[Luna]

I like the somber undertone of this piece. It was raw and real.

Enjoyable read. :)