BOATS IN THE HARBOR

boats in the harbor

tied up and no place to go

a captured still life 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I like the personification in your haiku, which shows me a new point of view . . . never thought about how boats in the harbor are somewhat imprisoned! Even tho your poem suggests that this could be a dull or restricted scenario, I find myself wondering what sea creatures accompany the boat, making it more free & interesting than it might sound, at first read *smile*

[Gray]

The scene is clear and colorful. Good writing.