SUMMER SOUNDS

Sounds of children laughing,

chasing balls and happy running,

waves dancing on the shore,

tempting little feet to jump with joy,

while bold sand castles stand victoriously,

until they are swept away by the sea,

blankets spread on golden beaches,

holding sun bathers caressed by summer music, 

who are grasping minute thoughts of yesterday,

of nameless faces of old friends,

and songs they sang together,

all part of summer sounds long ago.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your vivid descriptions seem to convey a love for people watching . . . the way you note observations, along with possible feelings or mental activities we can only guess at, as we put together the random people puzzles. Your beach scenario is true-to-life & makes me wonder if you spent a fair amount of time on the beach?

[GalaxyGhost]

Ah, reminds me of my childhood, playing with the kids next door and smelling bbq cooking late into the evening. It's beautifully picturesque!

[Inject Positivity]

Ah! The mesmerizing feel of summer... I enjoyed how you have created a vivid imagery in the poem with specific details about your vision of summer... Your word choices and the thought behind the poem is so lovely... Very well done...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[An owl on the moon]

You capture the pure joy of summer, which endlessly inspires me. I love the warmth, the music of laughter, the scents and sounds and sights... everything so wonderful!

[Sonia Walker]

Any reviewers out there? I appreciate reviews on my poems. Thank you.