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this is my first writing would this be the good one.or not ...atleast read it once..

one day i was very upset for not being so special but..thing which was annoying me  was not,the reason which i was thinking but it was with the other success..i dont belive why ,when my any step toward doing something good...became..a fullstop for my self when i heard others result of being successful ...at that time i was thinking why should i wait ,why my steps towards it.... is taking so time to become the result...
but, soon i realize..that good things come with a great planning and one  day it will come i am waiting this will really..works one day ...............this is my initiall starts of my journey..to read it further wait for my next...chapter...

Reviews

[Mrs Meggins]

I will be honest.

The grammar needs work but for me assessing the story comes first. Unfortunately, I have no idea about the story at this stage to comment further.