-- Your words --

An old post originally written 23/07/2014

Your words I use to feel
like an amazing fresh flower
providing heavenly fragrance
beautiful view to the eyes
soothing feeling to the heart

O dear I used to love it

Your words nowadays I feel
like two sided sharp edged sword,
that slays with such love
and cuts with immense speed
and I can't even feel
when it wounded,
chopped me into pieces
and it started to bleed.

O my dear I am still loving it.

(c) m.st

Reviews

[Ayvid N]

Hi Manish,
Reading this poem, I wondered what happens to love. We kill it with our own hands. The poet is loving it till now, but if it continues, he is bound to ship out after a time. While loving it, enjoy the roller coaster ride. Good write, new friend.

[-- Manish --]

Thanks dear DIVYA. I am glad you liked my post.
What ever the situation is, love for some one shouldn't change.. something called unconditional love.. Thank you for your kind comments :)

[Ayvid N]

Hi Manish,
Reading this poem, I wondered what happens to love. We kill it with our own hands. The poet is loving it till now, but if it continues, he is bound to ship out after a time. While loving it, enjoy the roller coaster ride. Good write, new friend.

[Saddam]

Your words nowadays I feel
like two sided sharp edged sword,

you are very good on the way dear... keep it up.. Very nice one.

[-- Manish --]

Thanks dear friend SADDAM. Your words for me are kind and inspirational. Much appreciated :)

[Saddam]

Your most welcome dear...

[Saddam]

Your words nowadays I feel
like two sided sharp edged sword,

you are very good on the way dear... keep it up.. Very nice one.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Its a good write.. how ones word can work wonders.. the imagery of heavenly flower is wonderful. You could have used the word " double edged sword".. :) keep writing Friend

~Sophy

[-- Manish --]

Dear Sophy. So kind of you to read and review my work. I appreciate your suggestion. :) Thank you so much

[Sophy Freebirds]

You're welcome muchly ;)