review!!

review!!

A Poem by mani
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View..review!!

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thanks for taking out your time,
i value it, as if mine,
you read this little poem line
and feel the pinch of flowing rhyme!!!

now you think what i wrote,
its like no compass in a boat,
but just my words trying to float,
assuring you its a no-knave note!!!


 i had to share something to you,
something good from my view,
with my respect all due,
what i need is your valuable review!!!

i kinda write when am free ,
 at times i write a romantic story,
though, most times an emotional poetry,
a review from you is like a lottery!!!

"oh gosh" in anger you say,
with a complete different expression sway,
i present to you my writings in a tray,
u hate it,u like it .....just say!!!!

© 2014 mani


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Added on October 18, 2014
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mani

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