Bad Boy Nathaniel

I fell in love with a bad boy, someone my mother would definitely disapprove of. what am i going to do?

nathaniel is two years older than me, hes a junior while im a freshman. nathaniel is a badboy. he doesnt drink or smoke, but he skips a lot. he still get straight a's though. hes so smart and cute. hes also sensitive to peoples feelings. he has a really bad temper and thinks he knows it all. i dont know why, but he is the one i love.

i first met him in a computer room. it was so cool, the room. its hard to describe it. tables would be sticking out from the wall with rounded edges moving towards the middle of the room and the computers would be on top of the tables. it was one of the mac flat screen computers. i was going to the back of the room like always. i jumped over the last table to get on the other side of the table and thats when i saw him.

he was laying down on the ground. he looked so casual, just laying there, like he had no care in the world at all. i think he was asleep. i squat down next to him. i looked at his face, man how i wanted to poke it. he just looks so peacful. and cute. no not cute, hot. never saw him before. he probably doesnt go to this school.

he woked up and i got so scared i almost fell, but i saved myself just in time and i stood up straight. i got so scared. he started to talk to me bit i dont remember a thing he said. we just talked about random things, nothing in particular. nothing special, just small talks. i learned what his name was, how old he was. i was falling in love with him. it was only one small talk but i still fell for him. i was just attracted to him, i dont know why.

 

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somehow our garage looks exactly like the computer room we met in. nothing happened, not that i know of, no one moved. and we were still in there. it was dinner time, so i left the room. my family was eating together on that night. i had some friends over, but i dont remember inviting them. it was this girl from my school and her boyfriend. we dont really talk to each other but for some reason shes here. they left the table at some point, but i dont know where they went.

after i finished eating, i went to the laundry room, which is right next to the garage door, and i saw the lovebirds making out on top of a sack of rice. i was about to go to the garage when i heard footsteps coming. i got scared so i ran to where the lovebirds were and shoved away the guy.

i turned his girlfriend to look at me and pretended that we were kissing, close enough that i can feel her breathing against me. i kept moving my head from side to side to make it look like we were totally making out so whoever it was would go away.  i looked at her boyfriend and he looked happy to just watch us, then i looked at her and she kind of looked like she wanted to do it, ugh gross.

i looked behind me and saw that it wasnt my mother. it looked like a guy, like the guy probably in the garage. the one who i told to wait until i went back. i stood up fast and ran to the garage. he was still there, he didnt leave yet, good.

i walked up to him but he seemed to kinda pull back from me. i wonder if it was him who saw that. he probably thought i was kissing someone else. i have to tell him it wasnt me. well it was but it wasnt what he thought it was. i told him and he understood, i think. he seemed better. we were about to hug when the door to the garage opened.

i got scared so i ran and hid behind the door. she didnt see me, which was a good thing. i guess she was talking to him. i dont know, i think she was telling him to go away. im so scared i dont know what to do, i know she wont want me dating him, and the fact that he was two years older than me scared me alot. i dont want to date anyone who is two years older than me. she started to yell at him so i summoned all my courage and left my spot behind the door.

i went to where they stood and stepped in front of them.. my mother looked surprised but i ignored it. she told me to leave but i stayed there, standing in front of her. she told me to go again, louder this time, but i told her that i love him and i would not leave, that i cant and i wont...

Author's Note

ignore the grammar problems, sorry i was too lazy

Reviews

[JordanIsaacSmith]

A very well written story. Actually quite engaing and the character's seemed very real and that made them more enjoyable to read about. Obviously grammar problems abound, I really do think you should have taken the time to correct them all. However, a fun little story that was well written.