Dream in Reality

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screaming into the night

looking for my sight

as i fall from the broken wings of silence

blood on the ground, pieces of his heart all around

have you had your fill yet dear?

have you seen enough pain, do you want another tear?

 

i gasp for air, my broken voice so soft

can you hear the loathe drip from my soul?

you deserve each tear that falls love,

you're the one to blame for them all

 

honey you gave me hell

and you forgot to cut the receipt

i hope the package does you well

with all the pain from your deciet

its coming back, i'm sending it back

 

wake into the blackness that has become our love

don't tell yourself 'its just a dream'

and baby try not to scream

this nightmare has only just begun.

so goodnight, goodbye for good

Author's Note

i think there are a few grammer/spelling errors, just to put that out there.

Reviews

[Wildecat]

This is an exceptional write, descriptive, and very creative. Nice job.

[distefano 401]

this was really creative- the vivid vocabulary and interesting analogies. i LOVE the 4th stanza. but the whole thing, as abstract as it is in some parts, is very easy to picture because it's so descriptive. great write!