Comfort in Loss

Comfort in Loss

A Poem by Amanda Hope
"

it was fall loving

"

Coincidence, luck, or chance?

A sweet twist of fate in late september

Turned off  towards that fork in the road

Living in the moment, it wasn't in our plans

Loving in a little dance

 

Effortless and easy was bringing mysellf to spend time with you

Trusting, understanding were our conversations late into the night

It was instant chemistry when we met

The innocence of our first kiss seemed so true

 

Nothing beats a good laugh after a bad day

Except staring into your eyes making it all go away

And everything melts, it's only you and me

The world is in your hands and its safe to love

And I innocently believed

I had found my other half for the first time I felt free

 

You weren't afraid to dream

I knew that from the start

That talents gonna take you far you didn't let anything hold you back

I knew you wouldn't throw it away, you believed in yourself

You believed in me

You  worked hard everyday  never missing a beat

Always taking one for the team

 

When the opportunity came I knew you had to take it and run

The same as when you and I met

In all you do you will go far

The sky's the limit-that you knew

A change of scenery could spark that fire

That passion for life I know you feel

Trading the clouds for blazing skies

 

Our dance was cut short

If fate chooses we will meet again

Just as we were put together that cool autumn day

But we both felt it was ending

We called it off

Before someone got hurt

 

Yet theres comfort in the loss of love for a dream

Living proof theres always something bigger

To work for and put hope into

So if you find yourself thinking back

Remember the times of bliss

And don't worry about me I have to find my way

Never regret I would do it all again

I have my own dreams to make true

 

 

 

 

 

© 2009 Amanda Hope


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GREAT POEM!! I loved it. It flows perfectly! =]

Posted 15 Years Ago


wonderful thinking. Fantastic subject choosing. Great chemistry of love and dream at one go.

I agree with you that when we need to make an assortment between our priorities, we are nowhere to think about the most desired one. It is tough I admit, but still, we have to...

Thank you.

Raja.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Amanda Hope
Amanda Hope

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