jake

ch.2
jake

i can taste the nonfat chocalate yogurt on her lips. her sweet warm breath feels nice. but wait a minute, this is alice were talking about. its like breaking the cool groups rule. we end the kiss and she walks slowly away leaving me feeling seduced.
THE NEXT DAY AT SCHOOL
what if she thinks were together now? what will i tell all my friends? theyll think im a loser and a lot of them dont like her. in class i get a shock, she doesnt even look at me.she really is a different person at school. anyway even if i did like her she likes josh. maybe if i could get josh to see her how i saw her he would like her back. im so going to heaven for this good of a deed.

Reviews

[Admiral Kirk]

Oh, so it's this kind of story... :P No not that kind, the kind where the narrator keeps shifting... Cool. :) Good job.

[dana]

This chapter is good