nana

You lay in bed all the time
Could this be a sign
To call the doctor
And make this rhyme?

You probably think this poem is fine
Even though i think this is a horrible line
But i hope this helps you pass the time

It seems your lazy
But maybe your just hazy

Roses are red
Violets are blue
This is why i love you

Reviews

[Admiral Kirk]

Very interesting poem. I liked it. It's cool how everything rhymes. :D I don't understand it, but I usually don't understand poems.

[amanda]

ya this was a while ago just for my nana so its not one of my serious poem writings but i thought it was kinda cute so ya

[Admiral Kirk]

It is cute... :D Good job.

[....]

liked the last three lines, this is powerful and gripping.