i still miss you

 

Over whelmed

Stressed out

Crying tears of pain

Like a razor knife scraping my life

Interfering with my site

I love you I miss you

2 little sentences I hold on to

For some hope for some love

Something to remind me of you

The pain is everday

It doesn’t even fade

My heart is worn my dreams are torn

And I still pain out miss you

I don’t understand God

Or his reasons to leave me just with a dad

I guess its not so bad

But I miss your tender love

Like little ounce of sugar in a cup

Noone compares

You always have been there

And taught me what to do but mom I still miss you!!!!

10-23-09

Reviews

[The Ink Chapters]

I'm very sorry for your loss this was a very emotional poem and beautifully written. It's when we are in our darkest moments that our work shines the brightest, good work.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Good write...