love is evil

made me feel so happy such glee

now all ou do is stay in my mind

its crazy how things happen

love is evil throws you back and fourth

can make a person go insane or in such pain

it has caused alot of pain that day nov 28 was great

i never faked but did you?

i sit and wonder i ponder about all the time spent together

seems like at first amazing

you were happy towards the end sadness

i didnt understand

i tried to put it aside your all i can think about

you are a thief you stole my heart

i want it back puts my in pain because i feel you gave up

i strain to keep going while you sit back

the pain can be seen in my eyes

every one ask me ?

i say nothin but its my heart being ripped

i was scared to give my heart agian

i did and got ripped agian

its hard to trust

i try to think  positive try to stay happy

is so hard when i have a bad feeling

that day was amazing please go back to then

no pain just happiness

my love for you doesnt stop but is it enough for you?

i feel that feeling agian a tear comes

no amanda no positive

i suck it up and just say im paranoid

but am i right?

i try to talk but no response

my love is here please go back to that day

Reviews

[Daniel Atkinson]

Powerful. Great representation of the pain someone goes through during a breakup (I hope this isn't based on personal experience). Nice work.