The Winner

The Winner

A Poem by Amanda Joy
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Prompt: Write a poem from the point of view of someone who hurt you.

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I met you
and knew
you were different.


I didn’t go in for the kill.
Oh, no.


I waited
until our friendship blossomed.


Until you felt safe enough
to share a home-
to share a life.


I waited until you declared
platonic love.


Then my lips touched yours.


You knew what I was
before you kissed back;


A player.
A heartbreaker.
Your worst nightmare.


But I held you close
and sunk my teeth
deep into your neck
releasing my venom
until you were hooked.


And, like always,
I left a scar
on your heart
when I said goodbye.


I won’t give you closure.
I’ll never let you know
what I felt
or if I felt.


You’ll never know
if I think of you
or if I ever loved you
the way I know
you loved me.


You’ll always wonder.
You’ll think of me daily.
You’ll wish you could go back.
You’ll yearn for me.
You’ll dream of me.
And that means


I won. 

© 2015 Amanda Joy


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Poem with a different perspective! gud job!

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Amanda Joy
Amanda Joy

PITTSBURGH, PA



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