Sated

Heat and sweat

The sticky sheet binds

Dreams of flying

Now a reality

Safe, secure, spent

The gods are smiling

Their perverted smiles

Reviews

[ron]

Very nice, erotic through metaphors.

[Archia]

I like the way you expressed this and how you did it in a simple way (simple words I mean). "The gods are smiling." I like that word and what it means.