Still Waiting

Still Waiting

A Poem by Manasa.L
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Waiting for the rain

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The Wind Is growing wilder
I am waiting for the rain
Looking at the sky
Thoughts are moving along the clouds.
A smile peeped out of them all
Shine and bright the sun comes out
Saying hello! to the world.
And the day is back again
Saying bye bye to the night.

© 2017 Manasa.L


Author's Note

Manasa.L
Waiting for the raindrops

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Here in the UK we sometimes long for rain but rarely. More often we pray for sun and the feeling of casting off winter clothes. Nice piece with feeling at its core.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Manasa.L

5 Years Ago

Thank you here in India we long for rain because it's important for agriculture and also for us
John Alexander McFadyen

5 Years Ago

Yes I understand. The world in inequitable. Some starve while others have glut, some have water in a.. read more
Manasa.L

5 Years Ago

Yes you are right
Every Raindrop reminds me of the seventy's hit song Walking in the rain with the one I love. Look it up on Youtube.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Manasa.L

5 Years Ago

Thank you! I will look into the song
Depicts a lovely scene.
(Apparently, some rain would make it even lovelier.)
Nicely done, M!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manasa.L

5 Years Ago

Thank you Mr J
Yes we know how hard to live up without rain. i am Working in Gulf . Sun is so Hot and rain we are also waiting.

Nice work

Posted 7 Years Ago


Manasa.L

7 Years Ago

Thank you...yeah waiting for rain is very hard in summer
Simple yet effective . . well in this time of burning summer your poem really brought a smiling face . . . . hehe

Posted 7 Years Ago


Manasa.L

7 Years Ago

Thank you atleast I brought smile on someone.
Haha, That's sweet, fed up with this summer, waiting for the rain...I liked it...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Manasa.L

7 Years Ago

Yeah its so hot and I don't feel to go out because the sun drains out all my energy.
Surya

7 Years Ago

haha, have some energy drinks, fruit juices and morover GLUCON-D, remember that ad, hahaha, just kid.. read more
Manasa.L

7 Years Ago

Funny ads....:)

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Manasa.L
Manasa.L

Bengaluru, Karnataka, India



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