The Star

Shining bright

Cry, laugh, sin 

tags of the frails

never define her.

She, mother, sister

derailed her to Kitchen

bound to customs.

Years have passed

machines rule over us

still chains confined.

Rose, says her

ye protecting thorns around

cause She pain.

Untie the knots

the butterfly from cocoon

She the star.

Author's Note

A women has to be set free to know her powers

Reviews

[Falcon1]

Women always have the power over the man for God has made them divine.

[Manasa.L]

Yes sir every being made by god is divine

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSh..]

This Poem reads like the cycle of life and is a beautiful tribute to someone close to you. I love your choice of words. Women will always be the superior of the human race we are the life givers and when we are older we are the keeper of the light for the next generation. Beautiful Poetry

Sheer Terror

[Manasa.L]

Thank you so much you made my day

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror]

No Thank You

[Manasa.L]

We will be keep thanking each other and will never end

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror]

Alright you can have the final Thank you

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Manasa... Women are very nourishing, and men can be, also.
Men are very vulnerable to the charms of a woman. Women are likewise vulnerable to men. Sometimes nature gets confused... in the creation process. We need to go with the flow and cherish life. Your poetry touches softly on our being a Star. When the night is the darkest, the Star shines the brightest. truly, Pat

[Manasa.L]

Oh! Pat I'm so glad that you like it. You are right in every word. I'll keep that in mind. Thanks for your time.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Manasa... I agree with the comments of the other poets also. There are times when it is difficult to be a free spirit. Your poem is penned in a style that resonates. truly, Pat

[Manasa.L]

Thank you....:)

[Patricia Wedel]

You are very welcome dear heart.
truly, Pat

[Jimmy Yetts]

Yes, freedom is certainly necessary for any human being's proper development.
Beautifully expressed, Manasa.
A fine piece of work!

[Manasa.L]

Indeed people need freedom not to be chained in customs and beliefs. Thank you JY:)

[Re-Pete]

lot of truth in this. we all need to be set free in order to be all that we can be. time marches on, things change and stars must shine.

[Manasa.L]

yes indeed thank you Pete!

[Surya]

Yep I agree, They are the beautiful creations here....
Sometimes with fishy brains, hahahahaha......
And every lady deserves respect...
Thank you for your write on women's day..:)

[Manasa.L]

Thank you for your time and gentle words.
yes everybody deserves it