This Poem reads like the cycle of life and is a beautiful tribute to someone close to you. I love your choice of words. Women will always be the superior of the human race we are the life givers and when we are older we are the keeper of the light for the next generation. Beautiful Poetry
dear Manasa... Women are very nourishing, and men can be, also.
Men are very vulnerable to the charms of a woman. Women are likewise vulnerable to men. Sometimes nature gets confused... in the creation process. We need to go with the flow and cherish life. Your poetry touches softly on our being a Star. When the night is the darkest, the Star shines the brightest. truly, Pat
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7 Years Ago
Oh! Pat I'm so glad that you like it. You are right in every word. I'll keep that in mind. Thanks fo.. read moreOh! Pat I'm so glad that you like it. You are right in every word. I'll keep that in mind. Thanks for your time.
dear Manasa... I agree with the comments of the other poets also. There are times when it is diffic.. read moredear Manasa... I agree with the comments of the other poets also. There are times when it is difficult to be a free spirit. Your poem is penned in a style that resonates. truly, Pat
Yep I agree, They are the beautiful creations here....
Sometimes with fishy brains, hahahahaha......
And every lady deserves respect...
Thank you for your write on women's day..:)
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7 Years Ago
Thank you for your time and gentle words.
yes everybody deserves it