Dazzling Daisy

A beautiful flower

Rumble and rustle,

leaves wither and die.

Daisies always smile.

Spring or summer,

gentle on the wounds.

Pain she cures.

Children and flower,

innocence dwells within them.

Daisy-chain beautiful delusion.

Author's Note

This is my first strike with haiku

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

Enthralling trio, Manasa.
All possess an elegant beauty.

[Manasa.L]

Thank you...:)

[Falcon1]

A beautiful sense of Spring in your First haiku

[Manasa.L]

Thank you............:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

these are beautiful haiku...
a three part tribute to that flower that seems to survive no matter what the impending weather...nice reference to those positive people who help us through hard times.

[Manasa.L]

Yes the daisy may be delicate yet an amazing flower.Thank you for your time.

[Re-Pete]

this reads very beautifully. there is a philosophical truth to it. it is deep on many levels and speaks to me of hope, beauty and healing. i always like anything with nature.

[Manasa.L]

Thank you Pete For your generous words.

[Sonakshi Arora]

You can be so perfect with any genre of poetry. A poem about a daisy and yet so touching and conveying! Wow.

[Manasa.L]

Thank you Sonakshi that is lovely words you said