Two Little Hearts
A Poem by Manasa.L
Beating for each other yet is ignorant of love
I hate you,I don't love you. Don't follow me, never help me. I'm fed up, Yet I won't give up.
Two little hearts, running in the race. This is mine, everything shine. Stay away, or go away.
Two little hearts, Feeling menace, of each other. Ignorant of love for one another.
They fight, yet not apart. They like to be strewn, but not alone. They haunt each other, like a nightmare.
Two little hearts, born siblings, Fight for everything and on everything. But soon realizes, the love sizzles, hot then warm.
Two little hearts, have their sides, One falls, the other lifts. Always Live for each other, and stay together.
© 2017 Manasa.L
Author's Note
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Love Between sisters, unconditional
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Reviews
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I have four sister's and none have faded away they love talking to each other and being in the presents of each other.
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
That's the sweetness of relationships. Thank you for stopping by to read
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I don'the have sister so I don't know the feeling of having a sister but because of this poem now I get this feeling.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thanks I am so touched that I made some one feel those words.
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wow... thats a really nice poem...and i can really relate... thanks for sharing.... loved it!
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you Khushi :)
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Wow!! That's a nice one. I can completely relate to it.
Lovey! And, the flow is too good. :)
Thanks for sharing.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thanks for your time Agnibo:)
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7 Years Ago
You are most welcome! :)
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Sibling love is fierce; they argue and fight with each other constantly, but God help the outsider who stands against either of them.
Lovely poem!
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you yetts for your time
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wow. this is really good. beautiful subject and so creative. flows well and is very true. yes, unconditional. great ending.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Yes it is unconditional thank you Pete
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Siblings are the gifts of God . Thanks for sharing this. I can completely relate to it :D
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
I am happy to know you like it
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Hi..it is such a true depiction of love between siblings.. A nice one. :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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Very nice form and a wonderful poem with great sentiments. Very touching and cute...:)...................
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you Sami ji
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Very interising and funny form. I like that happy end . Cause happy end can give hope to continute to carry on. Beautifuly wroten too.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Everyone love happy endings
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Added on February 28, 2017
Last Updated on February 28, 2017
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Manasa.LBengaluru, Karnataka, India
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I am a music lover and a software programmer. I write to express my feelings, thoughts and try to put in positive attitude in my readers. more..
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