I remember

I remember

A Poem by Manasa.L

I remember them,
the day when I first 
laid my mind on you.
The day I felt that 
I was made for this.
The moment I wanted 
to be in your realm.
Yet distressed 
of my incapability.
You were so subtle,
made me 
even more vulnerable.
But here I stand now
urged to intact myself.
Being chosen from you,
gives an immense pleasure.
And intend me to 
be a skillful one.
Never again will 
back down from the 
milieu of writing.
The words have made 
me stronger.
Realize what I am 
and what I want to be.
I will remember this day
as the prolific day 
of my life.

© 2017 Manasa.L


Author's Note

Manasa.L
Your reviews will tell me whether I can be a writer or not.

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This I see a true masterpiece. Just from the ways you put the words together like a giant puzzle that all fit together. Magnificent!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Manasa.L

7 Years Ago

Thank u....and when will I get the chance of congratulating you for your story(sorry i din't remembe.. read more
this is very good. i agree with Tony that a few of your word choices don't seem to fit although they are great words that you have used.

if you really want to be a writer then pursue it. i think the best way to be a writer is to be a reader & observer using your mind, eyes and heart.

"Go confidently in the direction of your dreams. Live the life you've imagined." - Thoreau

Posted 7 Years Ago


Manasa.L

7 Years Ago

Thank you Pete I am so blissful. I will follow my dreams and ensure to flow in the right path.
A lovely, straightforward writing manifesto that both speaks devotion and demonstrates ability .
Gratifying read, Manasa!


Posted 7 Years Ago


Manasa.L

7 Years Ago

Thank u Mr.Yetts your words has truly made me more determined than before
Very intriguing. Words do indeed empower people, some more than others, and you definitely show that in this piece. Also, your authors note says that reviews decide whether you can or cant write, but I dont agree. Even if you got bad reviews, keep writing! The only way to improve is to keep going. Good job :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Manasa.L

7 Years Ago

Thank u Andrew for your noble words
The words - intend, intact and prolific seems to be poorly employed Manasa.
Apart from that this is a good poem filled with a message of finding inner strength in the face of adversity.
Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manasa.L

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the suggestion I will improve on that

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Bengaluru, Karnataka, India



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