This I see a true masterpiece. Just from the ways you put the words together like a giant puzzle that all fit together. Magnificent!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank u....and when will I get the chance of congratulating you for your story(sorry i din't remembe.. read moreThank u....and when will I get the chance of congratulating you for your story(sorry i din't remember the title).
Very intriguing. Words do indeed empower people, some more than others, and you definitely show that in this piece. Also, your authors note says that reviews decide whether you can or cant write, but I dont agree. Even if you got bad reviews, keep writing! The only way to improve is to keep going. Good job :)
The words - intend, intact and prolific seems to be poorly employed Manasa.
Apart from that this is a good poem filled with a message of finding inner strength in the face of adversity.
Well done.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you for the suggestion I will improve on that