I remember

I remember them,

the day when I first 

laid my mind on you.

The day I felt that 

I was made for this.

The moment I wanted 

to be in your realm.

Yet distressed 

of my incapability.

You were so subtle,

made me 

even more vulnerable.

But here I stand now

urged to intact myself.

Being chosen from you,

gives an immense pleasure.

And intend me to 

be a skillful one.

Never again will 

back down from the 

milieu of writing.

The words have made 

me stronger.

Realize what I am 

and what I want to be.

I will remember this day

as the prolific day 

of my life.

Author's Note

Your reviews will tell me whether I can be a writer or not.

Reviews

[Falcon1]

You have power to tell the story of what is on your mind and where they could be leading you to.

[Manasa.L]

Thank you falcon that is so kind of you

[Ayvid N]

There is power in the pen. Power to transform us personally and also to change the world. Beautifully written Manasa.

[Manasa.L]

Thank you Divya

[Ayvid N]

Keep writing Manasa. Its a beautiful journey. One that never ends. 🌺

[Isabella Ivy]

You already are (a writer). I can tell from reading a first poem from your hand. You think like one :) I.I.

[Manasa.L]

Thank you So much Ivy ::)

[Isabella Ivy]

You are very welcome! :-) I. I.

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Poem what take me deep . Than i exept wondrful.

[Manasa.L]

Thank U.....:)

[shabiyaswati]

The confusion that we all go through before we ultimately build faith in ourselves...you have potrayed it very nicely.
Love it!

[Manasa.L]

Thank you. I agree with you

[jacob erin-cilberto]

for poets, the words make us stronger...the words give us purpose...

first line seemed a little awkward because the second line talks about one day....but then it all smooths out...and is an interesting journey of giving in to that feeling of writing that nags at some of us until we take it on.

j.

[Manasa.L]

its right not many of us can make it to be a great writer but everyone sure are good writers.Thank you J:)

[Surya]

You are a writer, no need of anyone saying that.
And You realised as you conveyed through I remember, Well Your words make you strong more than you now.
Thank you Manasa for sharing...:)

[Manasa.L]

Thank you Surya I'm blissful with your words

[Surya]

Pleasure is all mine dear, I remeber, hahaha.Dont stop just go on.

[Manasa.L]

Yep I will

[SkyVy]

You are so talented,you are a future author,this work is a masterpiece!

[Manasa.L]

I don't know if I can be a author but still I will think of it Thank you.........:)

[Sami Khalil]

"The words have made
me stronger.
Realize what I am
and what I want to be."

This stood out for me. I like this but the poem needs a lot of work. Thank you for sharing...:)............

[Manasa.L]

Thank u for your generous words sami, I'll work on my writing

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly. ...:::)))))

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Elegantly penned!
Good choice of vocab here!
Nice to meet you, Manasa. I see the extraordinary in your hand.

[Manasa.L]

Thank you Tazeen nice to meet you too, I hope you enjoyed reading my bit of writing