A Winter Tale

lost and found

Cold and frost

my heart is lost.

where do I find it?

under my blanket!

under my pallet!

where is it?

where is it?

where is it?

wiping the window, 

I looked out the pane.

I see my heart is freezing,

Oh! so i'm in dreading.

how do I foretell

what's gonna happen.

I'm in peer

my heart is sheer

Oh! why it has 

to be pierced,

by your cold....silence.

Sing to it,when you know

you're the one,

who can save it from treachery.

Your voice brings a new life to it.

End the winter of sorrows,

And bestow the sunshine to my life.

Reviews

[Surya]

Well done, smoothly presented, I liked it specially how you ended it...

[Manasa.L]

Thank you for your time

[Falcon1]

Such a lovely poem they would melt two heart together as one from season to season.

[Manasa.L]

That is love. Thank you for your time

[...]

Very beautiful and rising spirit of your writing. Feel so happy and calm.

[Manasa.L]

I am bliss thank you

[Jimmy Yetts]

Evocative and heartfelt.
A powerful piece of work.
Approaches pure poetry!

[Manasa.L]

Thank u but still I'm not as good as you I must say you too are a good writer