Yoo Never Knew

Don't tell me you knew

what I was

Don't tell me you believed in me

like I believed in you.

Don't tell me you trusted me

as I trusted you

Don't tell me you felt nothing 

without me

Coz you never knew me

what I was

You never believed 

You never trusted

Coz you never knew

what I felt for you

what I thought of you.

You never knew what

was deep in my heart.

Reviews

[It Will Change]

liked it and relatable too :)

[Manasa.L]

Thank you...:)

[AndrewWrites]

This is a very interesting piece of writing that I can definitely relate to. People claim to be for you but dont show nearly as much effort as you do to them, and it is always a battle.

Good job :)

[Manasa.L]

you are right and we just keep waiting for them to see us

[Najam Us Saher]

I can relate to this. Often people say that they know us very well to some extent they do, but only our heart and mind can understand ourselves truly. There is no one who can understand us our way.

[Manasa.L]

Absolutely right my friend

[Isabella Ivy]

It stumps me still, why we, as humans desire so to be understood by another. Especially when we seem to lack the capability. Yet, we never give up. This poem records the frustration of the attempt to both understand another and to be understood. I have felt this! ' 'You never knew what was deep in my heart!' Oh the yearning for someone to desire to go after that precious treasure. You captured it here :) I.I.

[Manasa.L]

Thank you I.I. you are right people even after getting hurt wants people to understand them.

[Isabella Ivy]

Sad but true :/

[Jimmy Yetts]

Often, much too late, do we discover what were our greatest blessings.
A straightforward and heartfelt poetic assessment.
Tortured sentiments, Manasa!

[Manasa.L]

Yeah they are sometimes yet can't stop thinking of them.
Thank you ::)

[Surya]

People get to know the worth when they are in dead end to lose them.Hope he/she understands your feelings here.
Thank you Manasa for sharing..:)

[Manasa.L]

:)Its just an imagination of what it might feel like when someone has to face this kind of situation.
Glad its not me for now and thank you Surya .

[Surya]

Hahaha, am sorry then but your imagination is worth.

[Manasa.L]

:):)Thank you

[Falcon1]

Tis is a heartfelt write through your best friend who does not get how much he means to you. He must of miss the letter or something like that. nice writing
Keep the faith.

[Manasa.L]

thank you and its just an imagination