Helpless

Helpless

A Poem by Lieles
"

Falling for the unexpected and there is no way to help it

"
Why do you
do this to me.
How do you
make me fall,
deeper in love
with no effort
at all.

Your jokes
aren't that funny,
but you know how to
make me laugh.
Its like my heart
is now whole
and no longer a half.

You kiss my lips
and taste my soul.
I thought the taste
to be bitter,
but you describe it
as bold.

Why do you
do this to me.
How do you
make me fall,
deeper in love
With no effort
at all.

© 2017 Lieles


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Sweet! I very much enjoyed this piece. I'm not much for making suggestions but will this time. (And maybe you do this, as I've I've only read one poem so far) when you type it in, give it two more spaces after your writing, to center it. It's a better view of your lovely piece. Otherwise, it's scrunched down into the bottom and somewhat confused with the other writing. Did I explain that right? Thanks for letting me read :) I.I.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lieles

7 Years Ago

Yes great explanation, I wasn't aware of that thank you again
Isabella Ivy

7 Years Ago

Sure thing! :) I.I.



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Sweet! I very much enjoyed this piece. I'm not much for making suggestions but will this time. (And maybe you do this, as I've I've only read one poem so far) when you type it in, give it two more spaces after your writing, to center it. It's a better view of your lovely piece. Otherwise, it's scrunched down into the bottom and somewhat confused with the other writing. Did I explain that right? Thanks for letting me read :) I.I.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lieles

7 Years Ago

Yes great explanation, I wasn't aware of that thank you again
Isabella Ivy

7 Years Ago

Sure thing! :) I.I.
A raw piece of writing. Shield exposed for outcome. Sometimes the best moments are the simple things. Nice job

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Lieles
Lieles

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