Invisible

Invisible

A Poem by Lieles
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Fighting for attention only causes you to lose yourself.

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Can you see me?

Am I nothing more
than a faceless smile.
Whose gaze is forever
blind to your eyes.

Is this face I wear
not appealing
or the makeup on it
not revealing,
the soul inside
trying to show its feeling.

It only wants
to be noticed or heard
even If only in your dream.
But I fear
In there
I remain
Unseen.

© 2017 Lieles


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Great concept! I've felt this myself before :) I.I.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. I like the way you have expressed your feelings how they long for attention. I loved the last line. Well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Lieles
Lieles

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