Closer

I have a secret

Can you keep a secret

Id hate to reveal it all

When I see your eyes

Reality, it falls

Fantasy takes over

Of you and me in love

Ready for the secret

"I want you most of all"

Yet, you don't seem to care

Not near enough to fall

you really want to hear

What else I have withheld

Come closer

Reviews

[James Takeo Panton]

Very intimate....well-written, saying much with few words....nice flow too...good stuff!

[Sarah]

I love this. o= I enjoyed how it was written like dialogue, as if you were speaking it, and the actual dialogue worked really well! Great job! (: