BROKEN

BROKEN

A Poem by Edmerlyn Geralde
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Broken…..

Sometimes it’s a glass

More often it’s the heart

The worst is…..

You can hear the glass shatter

But heart breaks silently

 

Broken….

Sometimes it’s a bone

More often it’s trust alone

Broken heart and broken trust

Avoiding everybody seems a must

Because both of them once broken, hard to fix

 

Broken…

Sometimes synonymous to being lost

Being lead on…abused

So many heart, soul and spirits

Being broken every hour

No matter where on Earth you are.

© 2016 Edmerlyn Geralde


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I like it how you use " Broken" at the start of each stanza.. Its quite impactful.. Also the comparisons you made like that of the glass and the heart being broken are really something.. Nice work here :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Edmerlyn Geralde

7 Years Ago

thank you so much =)
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You are welcome ☺

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Added on November 21, 2016
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Edmerlyn Geralde
Edmerlyn Geralde

Baliuag, Central Luzon, Philippines



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I'm an elementary teacher trying to venture into the world of poetry..I hope somehow my poems be appreciated and loved. more..

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