NO MORE A VIRGIN

in need of drugs ending up in my veins.....

my soul is no more a virgin now.....

just getting a freak turned in me.....

ima  dirty dog running my fingers in the bloody hole that makes this men Mad nd naked.......

amid the cold winters of bloodless life...

draining my mental energies........and firing me into damn  clueless nights......

all youh got is nothing Jesus........im loosening control......

listen!!! u hear i dnt want to get physical in days......

just let me be dead......

her blue sweater and the resting pony....

still makes me feel blue.....makes me feel like Adam,as she was Eve......!!!!!!

Jeny thou art an angel...

but ima filthy JUDAs........

what the hell on this earth for Jesus as if u exist????

have left me to die in my burnt corpse....

make me rest in hell......lest i commit more sin.....

Casillas......gotcha see you damn uhh from hell........

Just Listen Jesus....

let me not ceeee this Earth again!!

i have had enough.....now plz stop f****n me

i have got youh Right....death silences my fears!!!!!!!

I willl call it a Victory!!!!!!

Reviews

[RickyLevick]

why so angry buddy...?
honestly though great work true emotion here

[Suditi]

Dark poetry.
Very poignant.
Great write.

[Coyote Poetry]

Some journey can end up in a bad place. Drugs poison the body and the mind. Certain drugs end is death. Hard to surpass the last high. Some victories can feel like a win. But are they? Thank you for the thought provoking poetry.
Coyote

[Cazza Tee]

very powerful, very dark, great insight..well done :)

[Heather Clayton]

yes, very unusual, but what made you use words like u, dnt and plz, it kind of takes on a tone that the time is now

[Kuhr Gred]

wow.. unusual feeling.. feels like i'm in the dark.. but anyway! this great! :) KEEP IT UP

[Alex Vidmar]

Very dark. Very different.

[Liderien]

wow...very dark, yet direct.