MY REBEL

it was like an intution.....i dint contemplate for anything while i was writing this.........

O CHE GUEVARA..........
RISE IN MY SPIRIT......
TO MAKE ME THE LYRE OF REBEL.........
OF RIGHT AGAINST WRONG........
OF LESSER MORTALS AGAINST HIGHER MORTALS........
OF MAK GOALIE AGAINST JESUS.......
MAY THE SPACE FOR OPPOSITION....
ALWAYS PREVAIL IN ME............
MAY WE THE PASSIONATES FOR .....
GOING OUT OF LINE..........
ALWAYS GET THEHONOUR OF FEELING THY ULTIMATE PASSION ........
IN OUR.......
               'QUANTUM'

Author's Note

it was out of sheer intuition.....i dint contemplate for anything while i was writing this.........

Reviews

[Heather Clayton]

I liked it but I am still perplexed by the word "quantum"

[Coyote Poetry]

CHE GUEVARA would have a lot of place to save today. He would tell the people. I told you if the wealthy countries control the world. Whole world would fall down. Look at Europe and the 16 trillion USA debt. Thank you for the excellent poem. I wear the CHE GUEVARA t-sheet. I have to explain who he was.
Coyote

[None]

This reads like a chant. Very neat, even if it is rather vague.

[Kuhr Gred]

like it.. GREAT WRITE! keep it up ;D

[Kainan Corrales]

Very good and powerful. .

[Spice]

i like it somthing i can read more than twice