nothing left of me

up to you, to take it how you feel like it.

You never cared

No. You were never there

You never wanted me

You just wanted to see

how far you could push me

how much i could take

you wanted me to break

I tried to hide

but you lived inside

i tried to run

but you sound the chase fun

i begged and pleaded for you to set me free

until there was nothing left of me........... 

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

A cry of someone's heart in bondage to a bad relationship, or to a guilty conscience. Or it could be someone chained to an abusive spouse or lover, too scared to get away and pleading to be freed. The energy spent in trying to get away drains the life out of ya. It's very true to life. The rhyme of this is excellent, the flow is beautiful and the way it pulls at the heart is moving to the core. Beautiful work :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

This is such a sad poem. Full of emotion and desoaration. Great write

[rt farris]

intensity contained in a whisper. that describes this piece well. it works.