Im like the wind

Im like the wind

A Poem by (*^.^*)Vivi(*^.^*)

Im like the wind because i never stop

im like the wind whos agony blows soda pops

im like the wind fast with speed

im like the wind that knows no end with harmony

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© 2008 (*^.^*)Vivi(*^.^*)


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I can see those soda pop cans/bottles blowing in the wind and making noise as they go. Great images within your poem! I like how you describe yourself in it. In each line you allow the reader to stop and wonder and realize you are so right!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Union City, TN



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