freedom talks

the freedom talks to you so listen

don't shut your eyes to me 

i want to make you see 

our destiny, how it's supposed to be 

and let the darkness fade

***

can we see, can we feel when we're in this agony 

can we hope, can we love, can it be our destiny 

do you know, that i know i can trust in you 

because i do 

***

now don't close your eyes 

stop telling me your lies 

don't live in fear 

cause' i won't disappear 

i hope you understand 

i'll be by your side 

so come now to me 

cause' i will set you free,

break the silence,

fill the emptiness,

and dream of better days 

***

do you know, that i know i can trust in you 

because i do

don't break me now 

don't tell me that it ends 

let us find another way 

don't let go now 

don't turn the other way 

cause' there is so much left for both of us to say 

***

can we hope, can we love , can it be our destiny 

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Okay, this is your first work that I'm reviewing, first of all I really loved your thought behind this one... You did very well to express the feelings... Simple yet very well thought out work... It seems that the speaker is trusting her beloved and want that relationship to flow with love and freedom... This was really innocently done...