so sad but true

have you ever felt so alone and dead in your sorrow but you couldn't say anything because you're afraid that nobody will hear you well this poem is for you to express you ... enjoy

to prove that they hate you 

they bring problem to you

then sit and watch you 

kill yourself so slow it's so true 

***

you want to kill them 

you want the freedom

but there is nothing you can do 

*** 

you start to search for a way 

the way to feel better to feel okey 

***

but nothing seems to work 

no drugs no music no smoke 

***

so you start to cut yourself slowly 

what can you do this way is the only 

***

there is something in you 

that keeps telling you 

more more it's the only thing you can do 

deeper deeper no one will ever notice you 

then you don't show up for a day or two 

people start to miss you , love you 

people start to notice you 

***

but it's already the end 

because you are now underground 

  it's so sad but true 

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[mou]

"there is something in you
that keeps telling you
more more it's the only thing you can do
deeper deeper no one will ever notice you
then you don't show up for a day or two
people start to miss you , love you
people start to notice you
but it's already the end
because you are now underground
it's so sad but true "-----True.
You portrait the truth of life so well.A silent heart is noticed but never felt at all.
It is wonderful!
Thank for sharing.

[Briana O'Connor]

This poem reflects the emotion of the great neglect that leads one to feel unwanted and optionless. The poem flowed with elegance and sadness rang threw. Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work. If it isn't too much trouble please return the favor by reviewing on my pieces.

[maissa]

thanks for the review and i'm glad that you liked the poem :)