Broken

Written after a bad break-up when I was younger.

I've been enslaved in darkness

Since the truth has come to light

Where color once encircled me

All that's left is black and white.

To you my love meant nothing

And my feelings meant the same

I'm surrounded by your hurtful words

And I'm the only one to blame

I should have seen from the beginning

How things were going to end

Now I'm left in loneliness

My heart - it will not mend.

Reviews

[smile]

An intense poem with good rhyming.You have written so well.It has great glow.

[Greg Skura]

Great Sorrowful Poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem of sadness and disappointment. I like the flow of words and story in the poem. Sometime ain't easy for a heart to mend. A strong ending to a excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote