I'm no angel

You made a mistake

The day you met me

You didn’t see the deadly side of me

Being a little perfect angel is out the window

Read my finger

Whatcha gonna do?

You’ve probably never been shut down before

Well welcome to a living hell

But don’t worry

I’ll try to make it easy for you

but

I dont make promises

Don’t try to stop me

Because

You can’t stop me

I used to be the one with the halo

But that all disappeared

And I fell from grace

It left me in this place

Being nice comes with practice

Being mean comes with ease

I don’t have wings

Because I’m no angel

So close your eyes

And hold on tight because its

Going to be one hell of a show

Reviews

[Alexis]

Whew, I'm finally able to review this! :D
Wow. That's an intense poem. I like the color you chose for the font - it adds a little more emphasis. I also like the idea of this piece. My favorite lines are:
"And hold on tight because it's
Going to be one hell of a show"
That's cool. XD

[Twistedme]

Nice perspective given haha well you got everyone looking down on you because you're supposed to be young and innocent as one would say but actually you have been strong enough to hold all the horrors inside and then you reach the age where you say f*** it and show the true inner being, had enough of everyone looking down on you like that.....tis what i get from this piece anyway :P nice work with the poem btw (:

[Eagle Cruagh]

Hard hitting, raw and intense.
Beautiful construction, a hell of
a show.
This is one of the more interesting
poems this year. Excellent !
Thank YOu ,
----- Eagle Cruagh