Regret

I never really ever minded
not remembering to ever mind
because the body does not mind
what brains and shames do mind
and minding what you should not mind
is like minding time that does not mind.
I minded you,
you minded me free
I minded what
we were not to be
I minded that you
did softly agree
that I minded you
and you minded me
and that
time minded you
away from me.

Reviews

[Pete]

Very clever. A very deep thinker. Excellent job. I like this a lot.

[Joy Francke]

Really liked this, nice poem!

[Mr.Night]

Good stuff here i hear the voice of a passionate person!

[Thesecuts]

Wow this is so confusing yet with such passion.

[Zoomout]

I am speechless , how can I express my love to your simple poetry , which is the deepest I ever read?

[Chase]

This piece has a very good voice to it and the alliteration makes it flow freely from the tip of my tongue. Read out loud, as poetry is meant to be, makes it even more fun; like reading, "Bubbling babbling brook". If I could make a suggestion, it would be that this piece would greatly benefit from an increase in structure and added punctuation.

[J.R.H.]

I liked the word play in here. It was a good read.

[Tania]

Simply beautiful ....
I really love this
-Beyourself

[Kringnicles]

Please promise me you'll keep writing. Forever.

[Jamie]

Beautiful piece of work I really like the style and flow of this :)