IMAGINE

IMAGINE

A Poem by MAH MEKOLLE
"

Sometimes we long for things, feelings, places, languish over loss, but the truth is, all these things you want live within you, you can choose to believe, let your heart feel, imagine no more!

"

 

IMAGINE


Imagine a time, a place where there's no need to imagine

Imagine a place where there's no judgement

Imagine a land where there's no suffering

Imagine a time when you laughed and lived, and loved

Imagine the days you strutted around like royalty

Imagine, Imagine a people who care like no other

Imagine,

 

Well, no need to imagine anymore

that place is close, that land not so far,

the time is near, those days are now

It all lives within you, right there in your heart

Feel your heart beat, it beats joy, laughter, happiness, love, majesty

Seek no more outside of your heart for the things you want,

Reach inside, experience it and share with the world

Imagine

 

© 2013 MAH MEKOLLE


Author's Note

MAH MEKOLLE
your critic is welcome, thanks for reading

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Vey good. But I do think this could be better:
"Well, no need to imagine anymore
that place is close, that land not so far,
the time is near, those days are now"
If you'd change the first line to "Imagine a time/place when there'd be no need to imagine"

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


MAH MEKOLLE

12 Years Ago

thanks Moniba, I will include your suggestion in my final copy, you are right, that makes more sense.. read more
Moniba

12 Years Ago

Always welcome :)

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Im a lover of writing, art, I have written hundreds of poems since I was young, but never got a chance to share my work, I always thought it was no good, but it provided for me the chance to bare my h.. more..

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